Alright
I'm a seventeen year old guy
live in the U.S.
one of my fathers four sons
i have marvelous misadventures every day
90% of what i write sucks
here's a poem
I'm gunnin for big Bro
Standing here,
in awe of the world,
lightning races across the sky
it’s set afire with every bolt,
Beauty is terribly fierce
and she is beauty
my friend
my precious friend
Fierce by neccesity
not want,
never want
It's a shame
the world got to her first
A contest entry
- AP FAMILY FOR ME!!!! by Shiver.
380 points, ended July 15, 2008, 13 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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YAY!!! hello as if I would deny you the position of Big Brother.
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ha ha ha ha - so we both went for the big bro position too, ha ha, well now what do we do? i guess she'll have to pick us both lol, hey the poem entered is good too yo, so hey how you been, lately?!?


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life's wierd
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