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Not a poem don't bother reading it if you're lookin for one

Alright
I'm a seventeen year old guy
live in the U.S.
one of my fathers four sons
i have marvelous misadventures every day
90% of what i write sucks
here's a poem
I'm gunnin for big Bro

Standing here,
in awe of the world,
lightning races across the sky
it’s set afire with every bolt,
Beauty is terribly fierce
and she is beauty
my friend
my precious friend

Fierce by neccesity
not want,
never want
It's a shame
the world got to her first

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  • Shiver
    July 1, 2008
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    YAY!!! hello as if I would deny you the position of Big Brother.


  • Domz101
    July 1, 2008

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    ha ha ha ha - so we both went for the big bro position too, ha ha, well now what do we do? i guess she'll have to pick us both lol, hey the poem entered is good too yo, so hey how you been, lately?!?