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Whimsy

My muse is the shattered door frame

it's the workshop below my feet

the car in the garage which no longer runs

It's this house

this living breathing home

where the walls moan and groan with life

this living breathing home

where you must climb through Narnia to get to your room

This living breathing home

 

filled with every character you could imagine

gangsters

businessmen

Skaters

FBI

rockers

nerds

jocks

goths

Interrogators

stoners

Girls with sharpie eyebrows

even normal people

You don't need a muse

just a home

Author notes

I've never had to leave my home for inspiration, we have the most bizzare people pass through here and everyone has more adventures then i could ever tell.

As for Narnia, i left for a few months and when i got home someone had put a .... well wardrobe in front of my door, there was a small hole in the back so i just shimmied through it and moved it the next day

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  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    Superbly penned, I to get my inspiration from home, don;t ever need to go outside really. Fantastic piece, good luck


  • Tattboyspet
    July 1, 2008
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    very different take on the 'muse' prompt - strangely, there's MANY things that ignite my muse to take hold as well, it just turns out that my muse wants to cause their demise ~sigh~

    you HAVE TO tell me where you live if this is the sort of thing that goes on around your place!!!


    • Krick
      July 1, 2008

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      i live near Atlanta
      i have three brothers so that helped me meet alot of people
      my two older brothers went off a became drug dealers which is where the gangsters and FBI come in, i want to go Marine when i'm through with school, i also have a love of metal, then there's the third brother. He likes to skate and have a good time, we know a few bands like suburban soul and dropout high.

      Ohhh one last thing the girl with sharpie eyebrows is my gf, i have a thing for punks


      • Tattboyspet
        July 1, 2008
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        what amazing inspiration all around you!
        (lol! yeah, granted, not all good, but inspiration nonetheless )