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Musing on amusing muses

Within my head are many voices
So for muses I have choices
Just keep them happy and well fed
And words just tumble round my head.

Some have meter some have rhyme
Some keep talking all the time
So when the time arrives to muse
I've got plenty I can choose!

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  • PassionsPromise gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    well done
    see you have been trying to
    put a smile on tatts
    think you did it

    love
    Passions


  • crimsondew
    July 1, 2008

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    This is really good, I ejoyed reading this lot, I dop not believe in muses as a person per se, so this touches home..All the best!


  • Sue Cardwell gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    I think mine just died or the migraine has really taken hold...and you know I envy you your 'little men', especially as I only have one


  • Ceridwens Soul silver member
    July 1, 2008

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    Wonder if we can swap muses or is that on a par of wife swapping?? Nice write Jeff. I want to paint a head with words falling about now... thank you I think?

    Jem xxx


  • LadyDementia gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    Wow aren't you lucky, I have one that's very stubborn Neat piece, excellent flow and rhyme. Good luck in the contest


  • Tattboyspet
    July 1, 2008

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    lol - and I see that the rhyming one usually wins through huh?
    hmpf! mine battles to string two words together and yours flows from the tongue wonderfully
    thank you for your entry


    • cricketjeff gold member
      July 1, 2008

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      For you
      I could reform
      and write
      free verse

      but then
      The other muses
      weep

      for rhyme and meter
      are their
      wine
      and
      cake

      Each voice can learn
      to write each style
      and everyone
      will write
      for
      you


      How's that?


      • Tattboyspet
        July 1, 2008
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        hahahahahahahahahahaha - wine and cake huh? should it not be 'whine' and cake for the rhyming muses?

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