Tender Mother Care
What better could anything be
Than The love a mother gives
Whose purity has no scope of doubt
& worth each day grows and lives
When any pain hurts our little heart
She tries to ease us with special care
Her deligate power heals us through
That we feel, the pain was never there
At times,when we really need to talk
She listens to us with great patience
And no matter if she were too busy
Her devoted love, would be our guidence
Her heart, over-filled with love
The way she protects us from harms
Whenever we need,she's there
With a smile on her face and open arms
Her tender touch on our hands
That precious feeling cant be measured
Within her eyes, when we see
We know we have been truly treasured
Author notes
My mom is ALL THAT MAKES ME SMILE
A contest entry
- What makes you smile? by silverscent.
525 points, ended July 18, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For Our Parents by WhiteAngelCake.
700 points, ended August 18, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Teens & Young Adults by DAMSELx.
300 points, ended August 30, 2008, 101 entries
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This poem expresses the love of a mother for her child wonderfully. The language and rhyme was appropriate through out. Thanks for entering.
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My mom is very special to me, and she makes me feel good. My mom does lots for me, and that is why I made this contest. She should make you feel good, too. If she does, then good! This is great poem, and I wish you good luck in the contest.
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AWWW, You wrote beautifully here, how nice is that?
show your mother - if my kid wrote something, a dedication, i would want to read it, show her...great write and good luck...Domz, One!!!
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thanx alot........
i just wish she knew how much i love her.......but whatever i do she thinks it aint right......but again we know we both love each other.......thanx alot for commenting
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