Foundations of a heart
created on dreams half-made..
Love took flight within
a bitter soul, showing the
world to sheltered imaginations...
Breathing new life into a soul gone black and white..
New worlds created,as the wings of dreams,
lift the foundations of illusions
And carry past sins into the sunrise,
Of new days and creations that will bring
peace to unsteady hearts...
Author notes
The Power of Dreams by donjuki
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A contest entry
- Contest Semi Quick Picture Prompt #12 by Weltt.
475 points, ended July 1, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is really nice, very good flow,
though i prefer rhyming poems i like this,
all my love, keep penning,
kitty xxx -
This was beautiful and very well penned loved it!!
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Great Stuff!!!
Great descriptive narrative, metaphor, rhythm & flow...
Visual & slightly surreal...
Love it...
Keep up the good work...
Well done!!!
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Wow... when you touch your muse's g-spot, what wonderful pleasures you find with your words! This is simply beautiful...
Ken
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
I really enjoyed reading this! Yes, dreams can and do work miracles.
's
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Aww this is truly beautiful
New worlds created,as the wings of dreams,
lift the foundations of illusions
Best wishes in the contest hun
Julie xx
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This is a different take on the picture, your soul lost and taking to the skies to find yourself again. Nice job. Love, C
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very beautiful
These thoughts are wonderful, the flow is nice and the ideas conveyed makes one feel hopeful. lots of luck to you in the contest my friend.
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Thank you very much.. Not really into this write actually..lol.. But thanks
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I love the words... breathing new life into a sould gone black and white... Deep words here Angel.
Juls
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Thank you.. I'm glad that you liked it.. I didn't really think that it fit the picture..lol.. but thank you..
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A picture is only there to prompt you... Take it where your muse wants. I enjoyed your write
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