to my child
whenever your where
will I be a good mother?
sooth your despair?
always be there?
to my child
however you wend
will you be a good person?
discover your bend?
learn to defend?
to my child
whoever you choose
will they love you like sunshine?
chase out your blues?
inspire your muse?
to my child
whatever you are
know I'll love you forever
you will be my star.
Author notes
maternal contemplation
Congrats on your baby! Im totally gonna pray it all goes smooth and perfect and your baby is healthy 
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370 points, ended July 3, 2008, 8 entries
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Thank you so much!!! I loved this write! I hope I can be all this and more...
peace and love
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you will be
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so sweet :.
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
what a sweet poem for your someday child, my sweet daughter!
You are so talented!
Look at all the trophies on it!
Mom
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you can feel the love and care that this has.. a very nice poem
best of luck
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Lovely write here
So sweet this one is and I know you have been there many times with such love indeed
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wow this is a wonderful poem you can feal the love
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How sweet! Absolutely fabulous write, good luck!
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That is so pretty!
A lovely dedication to your future child. I can sense that you'll make a good parent. Excellent job, young poet.
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Aw, this is sweet.
One of your sweetest poems I have read.
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aww this is beautifully sweet. I especially loved the last stanza, it ends your poem nicely. Your poem flows well, and I love reading poetry that involves rhyme; and what lovely rhyming,
Thankyou for entering, and good luck!
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This was really pretty.
I liked it a lot.
I love what it's based on.
It's so soft.
The last stanza is very hopeful.
It's heartfelt and sweet.
Lovin' the background, too. It fits nicely.
Good luck on the contest!!!!
You're gonna rock it!
Sincerely,
dovey ~
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This is beautiful. I love your second stanza:
"to my child
whoever you choose
will they love you like sunshine?
chase out your blues?
inspire your muse?"
This is wonderful. The imagery is soft and tender and the message is beautiful. I love it!
Just one thing, you spelled despair with an i. Might want to change that. Keep up the great writes!
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whooooooohoooooo
beautiful as always......i love your writes.....good luck as if you need it (wink wink)
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