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Yours Truly.

Your seduction so haunting,
the deception so spiteful,
though even after it all,
I am yours.

Beautiful eyes pierceing,
I melt in your hand,
all that is my mind,
I am yours.

leaving me alone,
leaving me for him,
you break my heart but still,
I am yours.

Unreal pain flowing though me,
denial of the discard,
life turning Hell,
I am yours.

The apology not needed,
as it fall on deaf ears,
for better or for worse,
I am yours.

Standing now before me,
you ask another go,
just three words.

I am gone.

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It took so long, but I finally learned to just let go.

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  • Angelflower
    July 8, 2008

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    wow... this was really intense.. you did a great job, there was so much emotion in this write.. I'm sure that it was hard for you and it caused a lot of pain but I'm glad to hear that you letting go .. Thank you very much for sharing this.. I really liked it.. Best of luck..


    Angel

  • jentathome
    July 1, 2008
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    great

    moving on is so hard. When you start to, you're halfway there. Good luck