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Disasters (8 words)

Falling disasters
Liquefy hearts
Intentions...
Loves an
            Illusion..

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Prompt: pin me 8 melting words

A contest entry

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  • RedwingSpirit silver member
    July 8
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    Very nice Wonderful Job Congrats on the HM


  • AusStar gold member
    July 4

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    Oh I so wish I could write short poems like this!! I just so can't!!! should loves be love's? People who can convey so much with so few words are just so clever!!

  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    July 1

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    This is very very beautiful. Wonderful writing here. I like the meaning behind this. Good luck in the contest my friend.

    Dark
    Wishes
    Wayne Leon


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 1

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    this was a great words here i so enjoyed this a whole whole lot very great job here this was a pleasure honey it made me toughly think

  • KayJay46 gold member
    July 1
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    Where's a cup when you need one? Truly a beautiful write...
    Ken


  • Hekate gold member
    July 1

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    This is so very true indeed. I like the words in this piece here. It's crafted very clever.
    Good luck in the contest,
    Kari


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    July 1

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    Lovely and all in 8 beautiful words
    Sad are your thoughts thou..
    Good luck hun
    Julie

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