In class I sit listening to the teacher going on about stuff i will never use
so I turn to my notebook and dream about how vibrant the colors of a rainbow are after a fresh rain. I think of what I want to be, what I want to do and I get lost in all of the possibilities that are in front of me. I can climb high in the sky and float among the stars or I can just stay on the ground and enjoy there warmth in my imagination. I think of all the colors of the rainbow and i realize those are the colors of joy,hate and sadness all combined and when they do combine something magical is formed right in front of my eyes and will always be in my mind. then I come back and realize it was just a dream, yet to me it felt like so much more......
A contest entry
- Awsome Photo prompt by AmyPixiDust.
450 points, ended July 8, 11 entries
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Comments
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Wow this is amzing. I like the detail you used. YOu have a great choice of words nice job!
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Thank you for the entry to my contest,
I really love how you have describe something so simple as sitting in class dreaming in a wonderful depth, I like the thoughts you have expressed here, and I love how you come to realize that it was all just a dream, I think that maybe if you were to put some line breaks in there and also if you maybe broke it up into stanzas that this poem would flow better. Overall i think this is wonderful imaginary, Keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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wow. this is so good. i like "then I come back and realize it was just a dream, yet to me it felt like so much more...... " it really good.
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