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Hoofs Abound

Come and follow me
I'm the leader of this herd
Follow me into the high hills
Where there are trees, streams and birds

We'll run across the countryside
Over the hills and dales
We'll sleep beneath the stars
Under the Moonlight pale

We'll eat the wild grass
And drink from the streams so free
We'll bask in the warm sunlight
And scratch up next to a tree

Oh, please come with me my friend
Out where the wind blows free
Let's run and romp and play
Together, just you and me

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  • angels of the night silver member
    July 1, 2008

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    "We'll run across the countryside
    Over the hills and dales
    We'll sleep beneath the stars
    Under the Moonlight pale"

    GOOD JOB ON THIS LINE it flows into the poem very good.!

    good job and good luck in our contest
    angel


    • Katie Lazette
      July 15, 2008
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      Thank you angels of light for your kind comment and for the Silver trophy. I enjoyed entering into your contest.


  • Nature Song silver member
    July 1, 2008

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    'Oh, please come with me my friend
    Out where the wind blows free'

    Together you and I, lets us roam free...Where the wind will carry us into tomorrow!

    Great job! Good luck in oour contest ~Sie


    • Katie Lazette
      July 1, 2008
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      Thank you Nature Song for your kind comment. Glad you enjoyed my poem..Katie