I see your eyes and I am instantly addicted to the sight
I see the photograph and think of what a mistake this was,
to ignite such an addiction that makes me linger for so long
I think about why I cannot leave, why I cannot just walk away
but I find that the reason is and can never be know for it is to complicated
whether it is the way your eyes glow in all lights or how your aroma just lingers around me. As I think about this and run it through my mind over and over I feel
a small amount of shame in having to admit the impossible the thought that some one could be and is just to good for me so all i can do is accept that you say you are to good for me and you truly are.
Author notes
all of them?
A contest entry
- Another Quickie? [I'm on a roll !!] by YoureNoGoodForMe.
300 points, ended July 1, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow, very good. i really like it.
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Wow, I really like this. And, yeah, it basically does fit with all of the options. I loved how you put everything into one and in the end it turned out as a wonderful piece. Pretty much amazinggg use of words and imagery ! *finalist*
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I do really like this. There are a few parts that could be reworded, I think, into shorter sentences. However, the contest is great and I enjoyed the read.
On a less technical note though, NO!! There is never someone who is 'too good' for you, only not right for you.
Well done.
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