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Imagine

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Imagine a breed without expectations,
imagine no rules, laws, or regulations.
Imagine a world with no means to see,
imagine no imperfection,or deformity.

Imagine if everyone proudly stood tall,
imagine no judgement, there was awe.
Imagine something is this outrageous,
imagine rampant hope is so contagious.

Imagine life without one single regret,
imagine what you see is what you get.
Imagine if life as one big doggy treat,
imagine landing on your own two feet.

Imagine the world from a dog's view,
imagine the discovery we never knew.



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  • Lanasaur
    April 16
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    Wow!

    This poem is truly amazing
    Lana
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  • Poetess12
    August 31, 2008

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    I like how you use the word "Imagine" in your poem and the flow of the rhyme is good.

    Thanks for your entry.


  • ckwriter69
    July 7, 2008

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    Beautifully written, nice rhyming and form. Well deserving of the gold. Thanks for sharing and keep writing.


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    July 7, 2008

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    Great Take on the Prompt!

    I really enjoyed this write & you made Will Power come alive is this piece! You captured the essence of the impact this dog must have on those he visits to teach & inspire! Fine work. Thank you.


  • HaleyMary
    July 1, 2008
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    Interesting piece. It kind of puts things in a whole new perspective. To think of what animals must think of people as they observe our activities in life. Animals have feelings just like people and regardless of what they look like, their personalities are what makes owners keep the dogs. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

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