You call out saying Fowl! Fowl,
And Judges cut that pretty crown.
Author notes
laid, fowl, Crown.
Vote:Entry '*EXIT* door (Poetry Slam)'Rated as GOLD.
Can't resist to write this nursery rhyme I remember of child hood re-modified.
'If you don't like the apples
Don't shake this old tree,
I am not after your boy friend (GOLD).
He is after me.'
A contest entry
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300 points, ended July 21, 2008, 27 entries
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Three pun's ?
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I read this a couple of times. Like it actually the first few times I read it. If you were a few years younger, I'd be a little concerned.
Write on, poet (you need more practice). Good luck with the silver or bronze.
Dez
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Thanks!
You are great for Gold-silver-bronze. A truly nice mix for the artistic image you show.
Want me to present you the same before or after the show.
Lol I love persons like you.
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cool- a performer with attitude. I was waiting, wondering and hoping for one to come along. Good luck in the contest!
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