Droplets of sweat shimmer down my waiting limbs
As i feel your hands sliding up, ready to begin
Kissing your apple bottom lips
The scent of passion wraps around my nose
as i shover my hands on your shoulders
Riding you nice and slow, whispering sweet nothings
As our body makes percussion
No discussion
I want your body like water
Sweet and warm
As it dribbles down my thigh
Author notes
Percussion is the hitting of two bodies
A contest entry
- Pen Me Something Sensual...(GOLD PIF) by voodoo ink.
800 points, ended July 3, 2008, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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very nice,
and the words that seem to be slightly off in spelling, actually make sense the way they are, like you had meant it to be. This is perfect as is. As it brings to mind the coupling of two bodies into one. I love the imagery of it, well done and congrats on the trophy
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Fantastic. No words can describe it any better than this.
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Fascinating....definately one to stir desire. Interesting choice of metaphor, quite bold. Well written, good luck.
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A very well penned verse of sensuality...just as we need water to survive, my body needs yours, it's not a want but a necessity...that's what I got from this...
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