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My Smiles

Tender the touch that I feel in you
an  open gift of the heart of two,
that join as one with love and devotion
upon the crest of harmonious emotion.


Soft and gentle the eyes that gaze
into the other in special ways;
to speak words without any sound
and echo the feelings that I have found.


A whispered caress on a moment's breeze
to keep me afoot but weak in the knees;
and in the stars, your heart will shine
a nocturn's beam I shall claim as mine.


An admiration that has hid within
released for a new day to begin;
that no matter the distance, no matter the miles
you are to me, the reason for my smiles.

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  • lianonsidhe
    August 2

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    This is lovely and timeless, like Gilbert's love for Helen in Anne Bronte's best novel. Super wordmanship. Thanks for sharing.By the way haven't you got lovely hair?

  • This is an extraordinary write.
    I don't usually like rhyme schemes, but I'm in awe of what you've done with this poem.
    It's amazing, heartfelt, and very clearly sincere.
    The flow is seamless!

    By the way, I really like the page setup, the background, fonts, colors, and such fit perfectly.
  • such love reigns within your words my dear one. if only to find such as you have again many blessings always xxx

    • Thanks my dear. I have been blessed with this feeling and embrace it for all it is. You will find it again too. Appreciate your comments.

      Storm

  • Rovingone gold member
    July 1

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    Beautifully written and phrased and with smooth, flowing rhyme. A wonderful sentiment. I loved it.

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