The curvature of your limbs
Is where I belong
I want to be the arms
Holding you tight
I need to be the lips
You long for
I couldn't live
If I wasn't the girl
You made love to every night
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A contest entry
- Pen Me Something Sensual...(GOLD PIF) by voodoo ink.
800 points, ended July 3, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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Great Write
Very emotionaly felt great images come to my mind.
Arms two people holding one another in a hug.The curvature of the limbs I see a someone who keeps themself in great shape to stay thin and it speaks of commitment to another again great write.
Could you read my write Death I Fear and The 60's and let me know your thoughts Thank You again great writing
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A very well written piece here, poet...
Love the last lines...
I couldn't live
If I wasn't the girl
You made love to every night
...it speaks of a heart of love...
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