Blindly trapped
In my barred, abysmal room
Screen of torn and broken letters
Nothing but text to me
A pretty avatar and a nick name
Something so false, so fake
But who is this?
Something so honest
Something so true
A crying face staring back at me
This pathetic one, myself
Drawn up on golden ribbons
Of something, someone who
understands
My black dreams and my confessions
Blessing pains and dark obsessions
Someone else to wipe these tears
Someone else who shares these fears
All my lies, my hated cries
In your eyes I wonder why
I can live up, I can admit
That I'm just a piece of shit
But... you don't seem to care
You say I'm honest, say I'm true
You speak such sad, sweet words
I don't deserve any one of them
But you're just being
you
Author notes
Well, there's my honest feelings.
A contest entry
- Ap Boyfriend for Warrior-Eagle! by Angelflower.
300 points, ended July 9, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
So, what do you think?
Comments
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Any comment that I could give this poem would be worth absolutely nothing compared to what you know. So, I choose to simply say that you . . . keep leaving me speechless, and continue to just make me laugh. And I can only say that I love talking to you. And I am glad that you told me your honest feelings because I think that's great....And I loved your honest feelings given to me tonight. And yeah, I can take that little piece of you and make it mine, how could I not?
....Simply Me♥
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