One Night Only
Here, every night front & center.
Lost in her eyes -
her voice that of a goddess
able to bring any man to their knees;
with just the sound
of his name on her lips
- in ecstacy.
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My life -
contained on this stage,
all eyes on me.
Everyone of them wanting a taste
of what I have to offer.
Licking their lips,
as I run silken hands across tender breasts.
Who will I choose tonight...
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She's heading this way,
wearing not much more
than a devilish grin -
Heart feeling like it's about to burst,
if she only knew how much I've become
intoxicated by her curves -
I would give her
everything.
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So little does he know;
his every whim, fantasy -
on the verge of coming true.
Can he handle it?
aching to put him to the test,
I approach oozing seduction,
get so close, no one can see
as I guide his hand
between moist thighs...
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Straddling me, already so full & hard;
I never felt her unzip my pants.
Taking me, right here for all to see
& I don't even care, I have wanted her so bad
& now, my desires coming true.
I feel her nectar flow,
as she grasps me tightly,
whispers in my ear -
give me your all...
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Once again, never asking,
I've taken all that I need.
Bring myself to the cusp
of abandonment -
everyone watching, only appearance being
that of a sensual dance to unknowing eyes.
As cunning as I came, I was gone again,
til my desires possess me once more...
Author notes
This was fun, writing this with you, Tasha...I hope to do more writing with you in the future...
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Bravo!! you two did a wonderful job.. very intense and sexy as hell!! and just about as hot too..lol.. I really loved this.. The image was.. wow..lol.. cold shower calling?
Thanks for sharing this with us!!! It was greatly enjoyed..
Angel
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Great write! I love the sensuality of it

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thats was intense indeed
Awesome play of wrds, great imagination everything feels so real....it allows readers to have a clear image of what is going on...a perfect work indeed... -
Congrad's to the two of you! Amazing collab!! Steamie and sensual. ~Sie

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filth pure filth!!!! but i liked it, nice colab, and i liked the way you set it out seeing the poem from the point of view of both charactors involved, at times it reads like prose but that no biggie!


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ewwww prose
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we had it layed out a lil diff with the line breaks and all, but didn't want it to appear to run on and on so changed it a bit though i prefer how it was, I also hate scrolling for ages to read and know others do too!
thanks!
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You would say, bring any man to "his knees" because man is singular in this case. If you would like a more thorough critique, let me know by IM. All the best!


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actually tis plural cuz its an audience full of men that want her, not just one

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Hi Tasha, but "any man" is singular.
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Great collab and soooo hot...well done
Love, C


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Was fun hun, will gladly try something out of the box with you again

Tasha


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