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Fluid Emotions

Vacant stares,
breath deep,
illisions kin,
delusion sleep.

Smoke cleared mind,
fire night,
without a thought,
still burning bright.

Days bore gone,
green twist,
problems lifted,
I have become,

Comfortably Numb.

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Its what I do, check out my other work.

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  • risewiththesmoke
    June 30, 2008
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    i like the rhythm! thanks for entering!


    • Coffer
      June 30, 2008
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      thank you, this is the type of writing I do most.