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Love of My Life

Bright blue eyes,
crystal clear like tropical waters and
even more tranquil.

Smile so subtle,
soothing voice,
contagious laugh,
pure soul despite your
natural flaws.

Your scent lingers on your pillow
after you've left for work.
The same that lulls me to sleep at night
because it means I'm safe;
it means you're there.

I feel you hold my hand,
kiss my cheek,
you smooth my hair and tell me
that you love me.

You have my heart.

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  • Travel Notes
    July 1, 2008

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    Very nice. I like the tender quiet tone this has...like a whisper. Sweet, simple and innocent. I love this part.

    Smile so subtle,
    soothing voice,
    contagious laugh,
    pure soul despite your
    natural flaws.


    Quite lovely indeed. Welcome back to AP.