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Companion




rib taken from man
sleeping he awoke to eve
given equal mate















Words: K.Botka
6/29/08

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Ge 2:22 And the rib, which Yah Elohim had taken from man, made he a woman, and brought her unto the man.

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  • Cynewulf
    July 1

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    Very clever. This one really works. I think the lack of punctuation works. I don't know if that was deliberate, but I find once you start to punctuate with this form, it starts to get out of hand. Sometimes the simplicity says it all.