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Unmatched

Her strength,
her grace,
her beauty among gods,
the unmatched perfection.

This gift,
we've been bestowed,
wrapped in a silk dress,
the unmatched perfection.

Fallen angel,
striking eyes,
all in all,
it's unmatched perfection.

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  • warrior-eagle
    July 9, 2008

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    i actually liked and
    i thank you for entering my contest,
    this was indeed very sweet,
    and i am glad it wasn't mushy mushy
    but instead it was just greatness.
    good work

    ...Simply Me♥


  • Angelflower
    July 9, 2008

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    awww this was really sweet.. I really love this.. It's really romantic as well.. You did a wonderful job.. Thank you very much for sharing.. Best of luck..


    Angel


  • City-of-Angels
    July 1, 2008

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    very nice! I like the fact that you made it romantic without it being cheesy. (god knows I hate the cheesy stuff haha) good luck in the contest!