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Living



dust of earth formed flesh
man was given a spirit
here to procreate













Words: K.Botka
6/29/08

Author notes

Gen 2:7 And Yah Elohim formed man of the dust of the ground, and breathed into his nostrils the breath of life; and man became a living soul.

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  • Cynewulf
    July 1

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    You have said what you wanted from the biblical quote beautifully & with 17 syllables exactly. It works!