I thought I caught glimpse of spring
sparkling within shadows
rainbow prisms
reflecting inside dew drops
Snow flakes
fading across the sun
melting
Buds hidden but bulging
leaves wrapped, waiting
branches waving willingly
Inviting just one whisper
For spring to place footprints
Into meadows inviting warmth
Waiting for butterflies
Author notes
Prompt is picture: http://ssuunnddeeww.deviantart.com/art/dont-be-afraid-spring-come-31187875
A contest entry
- BIG Points picture semi-quickie!!!! COME SEE! by sailor ptolema.
1700 points, ended July 7, 2008, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oh my! lovely!
I thought the picture was so endearing, you really ran with it! and brought light to the sad face of the little boy!
I also really like the fact that there are no periods, and that you distinguish new sentences/thoughts by capping the first letter...it allows the poem to flow unhindered
I especially LOVED:
"Inviting just one whisper
For spring to place footprints
Into meadows inviting warmth
Waiting for butterflies >>>>>>>I love that you really brought out the
image that they are waiting for something, spring, in this case. I like the details you added they are inviting spring...a delightful idea!
~ an endearing poem, perfectly aligned with the prompt!
g'luck~
S.P. 
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Wonderful!
I love what you've made of this photo
You've put a bit of hope and sunshine into what seems to be a bit of a sad photo... Great job, and best of luck
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http://ssuunnddeeww.deviantart.com/art/dont-be-afraid-spring-come-31187875
~g'luck!! [ if you'd like to change it let me know
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I like it..how much time do we have?
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at least 24 hrs I want quality
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