She is like the rain;
the scent of seduction.
She steals my heart away
with loving abduction.
She falls from the sky
and soaks into my skin.
It's the reason why
I let the Precious Rain Girl in.
She saved my life
by making my soul believe again.
She would be the ideal wife
as I can only hope to be her ideal man.
Author notes
I wanted to tie this month's Precious Rain Girl poem to the month of June as it is known for Wedding Ceremonies.
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well done . . liked "the scent of seduction" and "by making my soul believe again" . . nice sentiments
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Thank you for such a sweet comment and wished that I could fill in your stars, but the system must have been on the warpath again for none are left to fill in.
Ted E
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WOW I love this sweetie great write then again anything you write is great hehe. Loves ya hope ya doing ok *hugs* and Kisses*
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Thanks for the wonderful comment and I will be by your way soon, but I better judge my latest contest before I get put in front of a firing squad by AP(lol)Ted E
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Of Course I loved it!!!
AWWWWWWW It was awesome and I think you did a great job with the tie-in. I also love how you write about the rain. "She is like the rain; the scent of seduction" < my favorite part!!
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Rain thank you for your very loving comment and I do appreciate itTed E
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Ohhhhhhhhhh!!!! This is sooooo sweet! Well written, but, I wonder if it might sound better with ideal wife/man instead of idea? Only my opinion!!!!
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Dawn, thanks for the precious comment and noticing I left the "l" off of idea, I was in a hurry when I posted it and thought I corrected when I pasted it, but it has been nowTed E
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You definitely spilled your heart for the rain and her seductiveness in this piece. Love the tie-in for the poem and wedding theme. Nicely done Ted E. You write the rain so well!
Storm
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Storm, thank you for a very sweet commentTed E
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Loving your Creative Flow
you have done an excellent job tying this all together with the wedding month all across the world....the flow, concept and delivery is awesome....you rocked it TedE........novy
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Novy, thank you for such a great commentTed E
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Amanda, thanks so muchTed E
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