blind patriotism
in the name of freedom
can sometimes lead to
abominable sins against humanity
in the name of freedom
can sometimes lead to
abominable sins against humanity
Author notes
Option A
Credit: Patriotic View by katiekate-freakingnews.com
Note: I am NOT anti-America with this entry. I just recall after 9/11 our neighbors here in America were torching mosques, assaulting middle-eastern residents...Ignorance is not a virtue!
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A contest entry
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Comments
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These are very true words.
I could not agree more.
Well done. ~Pamela


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I certainly agree with this.


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Thank You!!
Thank You for Your entry: blind patriotism
This piece tugged hard at Spirit and while I was reading which I did several times~ I kept being shown word: Excellent and in reference to stepping outside the boxy with Your view- along with explanation in the AC- I am shown after reading Your words what happened after Pearl Harbor with the Japanese living within the US~ how they were treated like animals-criminals
I'm also being shown the torturing of male and female detainees in the correctional facilities- ex: Abu Ghraib. I'm being shown unspeakable horror and the how twisted the human mind could go along with desires to unleash- emotions onto flesh of another human
I'm being shown word: Control also Authority- where those who felt a need to abuse- for a moment had that feeling of being in control~ especially when their Life is out of control
Also after reading, I'm being shown word: excuses...so many of the abusers made excuses as to why and point fingers at the *whistleblowers* for speaking up, for trying to salvage pieces of Dignity left~ One may scratch head and figure how upsetting-it can be to imagine the treatment of our soldiers-civilians (in other countries) yet there are many behind a veil who inflict just as much harm onto others using the flag- word: freedom as a balm for revenge~
Hopefully that makes some sense
Magnificent take on the prompt~
Powerful message and images You have brought forth
These words grabbed and pulled~
blind patriotism...
Unique Voice spoken~
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit!
Best wishes to You in the contest Sweet Soul
**Judging will be done shortly...
Many blessings too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~


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So true
You are so right, fellow poet. Unfortunately, some people take patriotism too far. Brilliant words here.





