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[ It was innocent at first. ]

It was innocent at first.
Two children playing the game of love,
Until those children turned into teens,
And now one is resting up above.
It started with a hi,
A hello, and a gentle shove.
But no matter how gentle it was,
It was still a shove.

A shove toward the future.
A gruesome one it would be.
One filled with pain and torment,
Until one night she decided to flee.
Away from his charms,
And away from his plee,
"I'll promise I'll change,
Just please don't leave me"

She'd fallen for it once,
And she'd fallen for it twice,
But when she looked in her new doughter's eyes
Falling again would never suffice.
A seventeen year old girl,
With a heart full of spice
Was leaving her man
Who's heart was made of ice.

As she packed up her things
So she could stay with a friend,
Her lover of 2 years
Vowed to not let it end.
Although 8 years in prison
Is what he'll spend,
He grabbed her from behind,
And that was the end.

The daughter was taken.
The man was arrested.
Now 5 years have gone by
And millions have protested
For this one woefull woman
Whos judgement was tested.
Now she sleeps with the angels,
And her soul has been rested.

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  • Samm.
    July 1, 2008

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    . i love this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    i love the purpose and how i understood what happened from the beginning good luck in this contest. i absolutely love this one though.


  • ellaelu
    June 30, 2008

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    I really like this, but it freaked me out..the picture you used, is what I use as my avatar , lol. And I though, " I didnt write that," lol.. sorry.. I am slow today.