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The List



I'm not your rusty nail

or lovers drooling fool.
I am the woman.......
who believed in you.

You are not my sour cream,
or midnight joyful scream.

Welcome foolish lover

to the bullshit list.

No weeping restless nights

or aching soulful blues.

this party's going on......

Without You. 

 

Welcome wasted breath,

to the bullshit list.
Where I control you...
Where I own you.......

Where all your
Lies and excuses

are nothing more
then filth for my list.

Welcome Mr. Ex

to the Bullshit list.
I am not your rusty nail
or lovers drooling fool
I am the bitch
YOU PISSED OFF.
Welcome dearest darlin'

to the Bullshit list.

sweetly

the back-up girls
sang:

Bullshit-bullshit list
Dew do do
Bullshit-
bullshit list
He found his butt

On the bullshit list!

Ou-ch! 

 

Author notes

Contest prompt: Prompt 1: the picture lyrics, poem, or story.
Picture talented artistry of Crystal Dawn.

I thought this gal looked like she needed to put something or someone on her
bullshit list.

A little trick a very wise man taught me...
piece of paper and mighty pen...with the title Bullshit right on top.
Then you list it out..the name and events that have you twisted, edgey, or just
don't know what to do.
Each day...you write one thing..you can do...to physically cross the bullshit
off your list.

I kinda ran away with it, can you tell?
It could be the hot deck we just had to build!
my hubbie's looking at me kinda scared!
I assured him....oh..honey you are kewl!
giggle.
I hope you liked it...it must be the summer heat.
Big fan of screaming electric and low bass guitars,
hoping you are too!

A contest entry

Please don't be shy to comment...it's how we grow poetically!

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Comments

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  • Harlequin Bunny
    July 2, 2008

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    I do like the modifications you made to it! Helped to "fill it out" a bit ..
    In line 21, did you mean "lies and excuses"? You just say "excuse"

  • limechic
    July 2, 2008

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    hahaha i love the idea of a bullshit list. i should start one of those! awesome write, i enjoyed every part of it!

  • hardeepb
    July 2, 2008

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    Wonderful poetry. This is so raw in emotion I can't even describe it. Bullshit list HA! You made me laugh there; what's funnier is because it is that much more serious and you had a right to be so mad.

    "
    Where all your
    Lies and excuse
    are nothing more
    then filth for my list."

    I love that. Brilliant. You go. Keep going. Fuck the lies. Lies are filth. I love it. I wish I was as strong as you. 9/10. Write more please! Feel free to check out some of my stuff =)


  • Angelflower
    July 2, 2008

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    Bravo!!!!

    Haha.. I need a bullshit list!!! But then it would just be waaay too long and I wouldn't be able to remember all the names that would go on that list.. Lol.. You did a wonderful job!! I really love this!! it was funny and would make a kick butt song!! best of luck granny dear!!!



    Angel


  • Sound of Madness
    July 1, 2008
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    This is so great! I really enjoyed reading this. Fantastic work, and good luck in the contest.

  • Harlequin Bunny
    June 30, 2008
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    hahaha I really enjoyed this, all the more so for the information you supplied in the Author's Notes! I've never heard of a "Bullshit List" before, but it's a darned good idea! I feel bad for your husband! He's probably wondering if he's on your list!

    I can hear this, definately with the screaming electric and bass you mentioned .. a "don't f*** with me" singer with a razor voice .. I particularly like Kittie, and Jack Off Jill, so this would fit nicely in either band's playlist!

    Thank you very much for entering this into the contest, I loved it!

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