Love must burn like fire
In the darkness of the night
Shining in her dark eyes
Filling them with its light
A tender touch that stings
With loves electric shock
Holding tight forever now
In each others arms now locked
Soul's that bind together
With the touching of the skin
Love that's born of innocence
It's where true passion begins
A contest entry
- LOVERS by Whispering Wind.
750 points, ended July 15, 2008, 11 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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See? With a title like that, all the girls will come running!
Your poem is passionate and filled with beautiful tender lines that bring happy images to the reader's mind.
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excellent~
Full of love and passion
This poem speaks of true love and that is hard to find these days...my hubby and I have been married for 25 yrs this past Feb..oh we fuss and make up...but the love is there and that is all that counts as does this poem...
Congrats on the Honorable Mention
It is really worthy of it...and more I think
Hugs
Susan~~~
P S I had to look you up and find out who you were roflol
didn't know you had changed your named...this will take some getting used to....
I am still so used to Kniepower..
Thanks for stopping by and giving me a read
Your a sweetie...hope all has been going well with you I have been back in the hospital....the last chemo round like to have done me in and esp with this heat....
Again thanks for read....Mr.Whisper
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love that's born of innocence it's where true passion begins...sighs...so soft and sweet, filled with a tenderness all its own...sighs...niaish so much for entering
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"tender touch that stings with loves electric shock". Such a truer line was ever written. IN the study of tantric love, there is a spot on a man's shaft, that if gently prodded will send him to outer space!
The love of which you write,
is so seldom found.
A look, a touch, a quiet, tender sound.
Never settle until you feel safe as a friend.
Read deep into their soul; two hearts will meet and blend.
Best wishes my elusive poet!
Love,
Linda
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So very true that ending! The whole piece is beautiful.. sigh..oh to find a love like that!!
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Oh I love that line : Tender touch that stings with loves electric shock; just reads so powerful.
And this piece : souls that bind together thats just beautiful.
It's just pure and utterly beautiful Good luck my friend in the contest
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