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[silence]

Missing image
Streams of pleasure
wash my mind
clean of thought.

Intensity flames
in my eyes without
sound.

I fragment in the moment,
each cell noiselessly
rejoicing.



Author notes

Prompt: Saturate me silent
Picture Credit: http://sylviad.deviantart.com/art/Orgasm-59506680
20 – 25 words

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  • DeGraw
    July 1

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    Ravishing!

    Captured beautifully in a free flowing verse. I am always impressed anew at your constant variety of poetry and topics.
    Regards,
    Jennifer


  • Lucy. gold member
    July 1
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    'I fragment in the moment'...
    Fabulous! Well done.


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    June 30
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    Forgot these guys!!


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    June 30

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    this was wonderful!!! I really loved it!! its was sweet yet intense too!! Bravo!! Best of luck!


    Angel

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 30

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    A very passionate write indeed.. those cells were tingling!! Hot!


  • jcat gold member
    June 30

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    Yesssssss......PLEASE!!! HOT HOT HOT......I was to late for this contest but as soon as I saw the prompt I thought of this too!! You nailed it in my eyes!!


    • KayJay46 gold member
      June 30
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      I do believe "nailing it" is what I had in mind ... glad I can be your stand in...
      Ken

      • jcat gold member
        June 30
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        Well I am glad that you caught my naughty...
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