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hungry

ravenous passion

unbridaled lust

 

overcoming lovers

in the shadow of night

 

penetrating eyes

hungry lips

racing hearts 

 

winner takes all

 

 

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15-20 words
Prompt: Finding me fierce

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  • midnightblue1272
    July 1

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    Love is a game

    You know, a quasi-famous singer once said, "Love is a Game. You don't play to win; you play to survive." You conveyed that here. Good work.


  • xianariaslifetime gold member
    June 30

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    penetrating eyes

    hungry lips

    racing hearts



    winner takes all



    Exciting baby!
    Loved this hot!!!


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    June 30

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    Ahhh the power plays of passion!! I wondered if someone might go somewhat sensual with this! Fierce and fabulous!