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Prince of Shadows

Missing image
your fingertips across my skin,
Is making love such a sin?
your gentle kisses along my neck,
this love will never go to wreck,

the way you make love to me,
even though we don't always agree,
people always say your so malicious,
but they don't know your just ambitious

your always loving, understanding,
in everything you do, your outstanding,
your eyes are like a celestial ocean,
my love tonight I promise you my devotion,

So Determined In all you do,
you share your heart with very few,
just me and you, one soul together,
your touches on my body just like a feather,

you never lie, never deceive,
you will always success to achieve,
My Dark Angel, My Love, My King,
It's your love that does Bring

me to be Satisfied, left in a daze,
Your love around me In It's misty haze,
With you I always feel so amazed
some people may think that this love Is crazed

I want you to know, I love you so,
always and forever, like that dream long ago,
My Dark Angel, King and all,
And If you Fall You will not Crawl...

  ....My Blackened Wings Will protect you...

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  • wow amazing write i loved it alot. love, Shelly :]
  • yum yum... sexy pic lol... nicely done honey this is very sensual.. the rhyme t ome was a little obvious but still read out good great job!

  • Thanks for entering my contest. The rhyming seems forced in some places, but it flows well. I wish you much luck.
  • First of all I love [LOVE] that picture. This is hauntingly beautiful, in all honesty it brought a tear to my eye. I like to deny these things but I must give credit where credit is due. The ending was perfection incarnate. Actually, this makes me want to be happy and very few pieces [ or writers for that matter] have the ability to make me want to be happy. Thank you for this. At this rate you may end up being my poetic mentor haha.

    xxx
    Rodwen

  • Ohkay, so I absolutely LOVE this poem. It is absolutely mind-boggling how you put this together, and wow. Just everything about this made me

    You have talent, doll♥

    "your always loving, understanding,
    in everything you do, your outstanding,
    your eyes are like a celestial ocean,
    my love tonight I promise you my devotion"

    Beautiful lines. Beautiful background [Seeing this made me think of. I don't even know what, but it was so captivating. haha] Beautiful poem
    Much love

  • Love this! Such a beautiful darkness to it, very well crafted hunni. The background is a perfect match to your work. Love the pic to, very inspiring. Good luck in the contest

  • verrry sexy, and sweet, and it relates so much to my ex without the super-ambition... oh thanks just make it more difficult... lol, that aside, this is a beautiful piece, you create vivid emotion and circumstance. Well done m'dear!!


  • Vallasch gold member
    July 2
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    Aww wow, this is deffinately one of my favourites ever, dark but sincere and sweet.

  • my applause for my previous statement.

  • wow, my sweetblood. you would make any man whose heart you'd stolen mad with jealousy. and as always, your words run me through as if it were a stake of morbid pleasure.
    yours in eternity
    A
  • Bravo!!! bravo!!! I told you you could do it..Lol.. I really loved this hun.. It's just so romantic yet dark and stuff Your muse sure moved with this write.. I really loved it.. And I have that picture too...lol.. Best of luck hun!!
    Love you

    Angel
  • Zarokk666
    July 1
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    wow - this is stunningly beautiful, sweetheart
    Love it...

  • excellent

    That Is Absolutely Awesome. Such pictures invade the mind of how love is supposed to be. careing for each other and devoting one to the other. beautiful words wonderfully written keep up the good work. -Stealer of souls-

  • awww this is a beautiful write hun and I love the detail and description of it. a depe and sensual plus moving write. you have a way with words of love. well done
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