Protruding perky breasts..
Wet from the shower's droplets
Make her rosy nipples stand erect
and
Entice the lover to caress them.
but first
Despite their alluring beauty...
He moves to taste and tease
Her luscious sensual enticing lips.
And though only a peck...
The magic of that soft kiss
Makes her inner passons of lust ignite...
Into a fire of wanton lust.
for
Even before he touches her sensous lips
Her desires for the kiss is unsatiable...
Making her heart melt
And race in anticiaption of his next move...
After kissing her lips,
He moves to her neck...
Giving her goose bumps up an down her spine...
then
Without another moments hesitation...
He kisses her again...
This kiss caught her by suprise
For he kissed her beautiful allurng eyes!
Causing her to gasp and moan...
but
She said ahhh. That was nice....
Do it again, I've never been kissed there
and
It feels so different yet so intriguing!
Her lover then excites her more...
This time by kissing her cleavage
Slowly leaving a trail of more kisses
From her breasts down her belly...
To the inside of her delicate fleshy white thighs!
but
As she quivers especting a kiss on her inner lips.
He moves away teasing her desire for him
And kisses her in another unexpected place...
The back of her knees!
She again jumped from the suprise
And she begged for more kisses
for
For she had orgasmed each time she was kissed
and
He had never yet entered her garden of sexual delight!
Now writhing in anticaption of his next suprise,
He turned her over and started kissing her back
Trailing kisses...
All the way to her sexy round buttocks
Massging her at the same time with his hands...
Author notes
unfinished...This poem is my attempt to show love can be not only erotic but beautiful when done slowly...
A contest entry
- PASSION by Whispering Wind.
500 points, ended July 15, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Dragonheart1,
there is always a time for a slow advancement or a heated charge. The true man knows what and which is needed.
Your poem speaks wonderfully of the former, the ability to move with a stealthiness and purpose. you have carved a wonderful image into the mind of passion.
I did enjoy your take on the picture. Well Done!
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Sensual and so playful! How nice to add a sense of fun and play to this erotic verse. I will be glad to read the rest when it is complete.
Blessed Be~
Az
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this is definitely beautiful in many ways. yes love can be both erotic and beautiful. you have done an excellent job showing just that.. you got my attention most definitely.
for being unfinished this is absolutely wonderfully breath taking.
good luck in the contest sweetheart..
kat
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WONDERFUL SWEET
O' My you have my attention now...lol...just got to love a man with a slow hand...the beauty of love and the tenderness flows so softly with each line...thank you so much for sharing this with me and for entering:f
may I have my breath back now*wink*
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i really like the thoughts you have put into this beautiful poem deffinatly passion, i cant wait to see what you have when you are finnished, i think if you remove that lonley "and" and there was a spelling error on magic, overall this poem is wonderful, keep up the beatuiful writing, ~Amy
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