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"Dissection of a Family"

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Angry raised voices; Regrettable choices;
Sadly, my marriage is failing.
So hopefully, tried therapy;
Her gambling addiction prevailing.

My daughter's a teen, caught in between;
Hears all the cursing and swearing.
Tears in her eyes, knowing that I
removed the ring I was wearing.

Seems I was forced to file for divorce;
The start of a long separation.
Legal fees, endlessly;
Type-written false allegations.

Daughter tries to hide tears in her eyes;
A victim of all the confusion.
Not much to say; She hides away;
Prefers to be in seclusion.

Finally, the Divorce Decree.
Time for a new beginning.
Ultimately, the truth I see---
"In Divorce, there is no Winning!"







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**To see an attorney to actually file for the divorce was the hardest decision I ever made---I did a lot of "Soul Searching" and came to the conclusion it was my only option!
No winners in a divorce--especially when kids are involved!!

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  • Sonya-Erasmus silver member
    August 11

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    Great poem,
    Some lines are a bit short and therefore break the meter.
    It's very hard to go through a divorce, good luck and remember......time can heal all wounds, just be patient.

    Thanks so much for sharing and entering this competition.
    Good luck to you


  • Cerbie20
    July 3, 2008

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    i really like this poem, maybe because i can relate quite a bit... but not to you, but a character...

    Daughter tries
    to hide tears in her eyes;
    A victim of all the confusion.
    Not much to say;
    She hides away;
    Prefers to be in seclusion.


    i was just recently this daughter... and i am very slowly coming out of my own seclusion... but i realized, that my parents were just happier seperated... and they gave so much to me, that i would have to stand back and just let them battle it out themselves. it is really tough to be that person, but i got through it... this is a really good poem. i loved it.


  • HeavensDaughter
    July 3, 2008

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    A hard story to tell. You are right about there being no real winners. My heart goes out for you.

    Congratulations on the silver!


  • creationsfromheart
    July 1, 2008
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    so true, and such a hard choice thank you for entering and good luck


  • Carolina Moon gold member
    June 30, 2008

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    I couldn't agree with you more, divorce is one of the most painful things to have to go through. Yet sometimes it is the only choice, as you said. I wish you well. As always your words are beautifully written and a joy to read. Although more on a happy note next time let's hope!!! Best of luck in the contest!

    Linda

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