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Constancy

Missing image
From an early age
never wavering in
comfort
  strength
      compassion

Now written with
lines of age,

love is indelible.



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Prompt: Mercy’s Hand
Picture Credit: http://katiet670.deviantart.com/art/A-Mothers-Hand-925273
15 – 20 Words

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  • Wonderful!

    Such appropriate words for the picture prompt! Glad you won a trophy. Touches the heartstrings with memories of Mother's love! Nice write filled with love & emotion... You fill your poems with powerful energy that grips in short verse!


  • Lucy. gold member
    July 1

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    Beautiful. Lovely take on the pic and I adore your title too. Well done.


  • Angelflower Greeters member
    June 30

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    ooh!!! this was really beautiful.It flowed so well!! And the image that you created was just so sweet.. Bravo!! you did a wonderful job.. Congrats on the HM..



    Angel
  • Ya know, if this is how to looks to grow old then I wish to have many wrinkles of wisdom. A great take, truely. Good luck between you, jcat and cerulean.
    ~Kystal Angel

  • Love is indelible and to show compassion throughout one's life is a wonderful thing! Lovely take on the prompt.. and gorgeous pic!


  • jcat gold member
    June 30

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    What beautiful words to go with that heart swelling picture!! Very well done!!! Love where you took this prompt very different than my own Best wishes

  • Lines full of meaning, something thoughts to ponder. A good take on the given prompt.


  • Cerulean gold member
    June 30
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    Awesome.

    I like that pic.

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