From an early age
never wavering in
comfort
strength
compassion
Now written with
lines of age,
love is indelible.
Author notes
Prompt: Mercy’s Hand
Picture Credit: http://katiet670.deviantart.com/art/A-Mothers-Hand-925273
15 – 20 Words
A contest entry
- Quickie... 20 words.. prompt up! by kiwigirljacks.
600 points, ended June 30, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
Comments
1 - 8 of 8
-
Wonderful!
Such appropriate words for the picture prompt! Glad you won a trophy. Touches the heartstrings with memories of Mother's love! Nice write filled with love & emotion... You fill your poems with powerful energy that grips in short verse!

-
Beautiful. Lovely take on the pic and I adore your title too. Well done.


-
ooh!!! this was really beautiful.It flowed so well!! And the image that you created was just so sweet.. Bravo!!
you did a wonderful job.. Congrats on the HM..
Angel
-
Ya know, if this is how to looks to grow old then I wish to have many wrinkles of wisdom.
A great take, truely. Good luck between you, jcat and cerulean. 
~Kystal Angel

-
Love is indelible and to show compassion throughout one's life is a wonderful thing! Lovely take on the prompt.. and gorgeous pic!


-
What beautiful words to go with that heart swelling picture!! Very well done!!! Love where you took this prompt very different than my own
Best wishes


-
Lines full of meaning, something thoughts to ponder. A good take on the given prompt.

-
Awesome.
I like that pic.

1 - 8 of 8









