I take shelter,
unable to withstand this
never-ending inner battle
butting heads, knowing neither
will take victory of this, eternal war.
Growing weaker as winds whip wild
and my sands
of
the
times
…begin to cease their flowing on through
Author notes
Background credit to Kari...Hekate
In a list
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie - - 10/10 by Noir mariposa...x.
437 points, ended July 1, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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So melancholy yet so beautiful! Those sands of times do not always flow seemlessly do they! Congrats on the silver sis!
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no they dont
hehe thanks SiS
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Way to go my percious
A true hitter you have here. Very out spoken. Nice. Congrats to you on you silver!
your
~Kystal Angel
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You've only entered the one of my contests?? hehe you should more often so i can read more of your awesome work!! This is marvously penned and I agree that the flow is unique and very well done
Thank you for entering (and I hope too see you again!)
Claire x
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yea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I LOVE LOVE LOVE it! STRUCTURE is so great!!
*love the title too
stunning write, as usuaL!!!!!
~a trophy winner for sure!!!!!!
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Thanks darl and for the title too lol..it is excellent
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This was wonderful!!! The emotions were really intense yet the feel of it was just heartbreaking.. I really liked your take on the prompt.. Best of luck sissy..
Angel
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Thank sis, great to hear ur thoughts
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