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Paper Doll

headline whores
bleeding through the pages

social butterflies
cut paper dolls
from their
obituary squares

 

 

Author notes

Was for a contest but I didn't make it on time...

15 words on paper doll

A contest entry

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  • midnight-tears
    July 4
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    woah this is so awesome 1 of the best ive read in a while gr8 write with so little words

  • ea silver member
    July 6, 2008

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    This is quite good for such a limited amount of words; you did marvelously with this prompt of paper dolls. This one actually impresses me.


  • notorious gold member
    June 30, 2008

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    Heheh

    Aww, too bad this didn't make it, cause this is freaking hilarious...

    "headline whores"
    LoL!!! Priceless phrase...deeply genius.

    That second stanza? Pure kick-ass awesomeness.

    Plus, the meaning in this poem is actually easy to understand...even better.