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Real Brazilian...

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Shaving close leaves no stubble
There is no need to wax
The surface is cleansed
As smooth as bare backs

Do not be fooled
By what has been said
Forests can't be replaced
By the nod of your head

It's not female ablutions
It's not unwanted hair
Mother Earth needs her trees
To provide us with air

Please tell me what you think

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  • sunshinegirl
    June 30

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    Dad,

    What a beautiful write this one is! And your message, is fantastic! I wish everyone felt this way! We are loosing too many forests today, and people hollar about the green house effect, and no one is willing to do anything about it.

    Great job Dad!!

    and love

    Nyetta


    • Celticpoet gold member
      July 1
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      Thanks Nyetta sweetie

      The photo is courtesy of Greenpeace...and it shows from the air the kind os scale involved in the ravaging of the planets resources on a daily basis...it takes centuries for these once mighty forests to frow...and with todays mechanical saws and excavators mere seconds to destroy! Glad you like the message!...love Dad xx

  • cass
    June 30

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    I love it. The message of how we have to care more about nature that's keeping us alive than how we look is great.

    Btw, I love the picture, it's perfect for the poem

    • Celticpoet gold member
      July 1
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      Thank you Cass

      Thank you for taking the time and trouble to read and comment on my write..it is much appreciated!..regards Dan x peace and light poet!