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Pretty good

Today just started off so bad
Got yelled at cos my boss was mad
But now I'm feeling pretty good
Had a blood test what a pain
Then quit smoking......again
But now I'm feeling pretty good
Had a water fight with my kin
Baked a cake called Chocolate Sin
So now I'm feeling pretty good
I wrote this poem now it's done
Gotta admit it was really fun
If I place, I'll be feeling REALLY GOOD!

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  • ratkos
    July 1, 2008
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    thanks now I do feel REALLY GOOD! thanks a lot!


  • AddictiveTRUTH
    July 1, 2008

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    Awww this was cute. Loved the mood, made me smile good luck and thanks for entering.

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