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Paper Doll

A cut from Tuesday’s news
Black and white smears of ink
His pleasure to peruse!

A contest entry

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  • tomisb
    July 1, 2008

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    Nice image. Cut out of the paper, so not all of the news. The words smeared and yet all he needs to read and with the last three letters perhaps all his delights shall need as well. Good metaphor and nicely delivered in three lines. Beautiful,
    Love Tom B.


    • dark cajun shadow
      July 1, 2008
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      Thank You Sir, i am glad You enjoyed it, as Your opinion is highly respected.
      Hugs,
      katie