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Lost

In silence I sit
alone with my sorrows
bruised and beaten
I'm lost.
Stuck in a life with no meaning.

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  • SignifyingNothing
    July 23, 2008
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    This was really nice. Good luck in the contest!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 30, 2008

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    That is what I am feeling right now this is a great take thank you for your entry into my contest best wishes and much luck