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If you wore the pants of a stranger
untouched and far from my breath

I could have walked away

silently

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Prompt ~ I am done being forgiving

A contest entry

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 30, 2008

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    This is indeed an inteesting take on the prompt thnk you for your entry into my contest best wishes and much luck be well


  • notorious gold member
    June 30, 2008

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    "If you wore the pants of a stranger"
    Already there is a kind of wry amusement being tugged by my brain... Not sure if you intended that.

    I like how 'silently' is on a separate line...gives it more impact. Good luck (but I don't think you'll need it) (:


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 30, 2008
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    So you are a Gypsy now?

    Best of luck.