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I shall Not Cry For You

The crystallized tears
that have long burdened my flesh
shall never again fall for you
I'm done being your doormat

A contest entry

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  • ea silver member
    July 6, 2008

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    I thought punctuation would have helped here, lending the doormat statement finality with a period both before and after that line.

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    June 30, 2008

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    This is great sweety lots of people can say this tired of being used and ran over by you thansk for your entry be well


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 30, 2008
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    Awesomely written.


  • babygirl2582 silver member
    June 30, 2008
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    Beautiful

    Good Luck


  • Blooming Poet
    June 30, 2008
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    Prompt ~ I am done being forgiving


  • SilverWolf
    June 30, 2008
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    ??
    Grace is here
    x ??


    • Blooming Poet
      June 30, 2008
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      My name is Molly-Grace. so sometimes I go by Molly and sometimes I go by Grace


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 30, 2008
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    It's nice to see grace.

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