The crystallized tears
that have long burdened my flesh
shall never again fall for you
I'm done being your doormat
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I thought punctuation would have helped here, lending the doormat statement finality with a period both before and after that line.
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This is great sweety lots of people can say this tired of being used and ran over by you thansk for your entry be well
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Awesomely written.
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Beautiful
Good Luck
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Prompt ~ I am done being forgiving
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Grace is here
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My name is Molly-Grace. so sometimes I go by Molly and sometimes I go by Grace
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It's nice to see grace.
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nice to see you too.
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