there once was a time
when i thought i could not live life with out you
because no one knew me like you
or put up with what i put you through
so when things turned bad for us
i held on as tight as i could
i just knew there was no one else
who could love me like you would
we put so much of ourselves into
this one thing for so many years
we shared so much love and happiness
but have shared even more tears
so when it was really over i was devastated
for so long i was broke
out of sight out of mind is what i convinced myself
under each sob and choke
a year went by and so much had changed
i thought i was done with you
then you came back and my emotions went crazy
and i didnt know what to do
i was in a relationship with someone
and seeing you brought up the what ifs
i just wanted to fling myself
off of one of the highest cliffs
i ended my current relationship
because i had come to a realization
i didnt want to be with him
it took you to see the error of my configuration
but i didnt really want you either
and suddenly that seem to sit well with me
i guess i am not really over you
but i know we are not meant to be
every time i see you i want you until
i have you and i remember your not really mine
and i know it will continue, just as it has been
going away more and more with time
Author notes
It just came out like this, thought it would be better. But oh well.
-AliciA
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a common occurrence with relationships, i do believe
you penned your emotions and predicament well
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The poems that just naturally flow and you dont have to think about are always the best kind. This was great, as it was rhythmical to me, and also i shared the pain and confusion you were portraying. Its an event most can empathise with .
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B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L
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Now this is a poem! Very nice!
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The poems that just naturally flow and you dont have to think about are always the best kind. This was great, as it was rhythmical to me, and also i shared the pain and confusion you were portraying. Its an event most can empathise with .
great read
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you thought it would be better???
wow thats better then most of mine!!
i love it.
i really can realate... and wish i could come to that relization...
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thank you for reading, i am glad you enjoyed it.
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Very nicely done. It made me very intrigued. Great write, and good luck in the contest.
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ty for reading
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its is very good. ilike this alot. i wish i could get to the point that i can realize we are not meant to be.
very nice . i like this
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