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[ I'm starting to forget ]

I'm starting to forget
why is love worth it anyway?
and I consider letting go...
but what good is that?
how do I live my life how it is
when they all except me to choose?
I know who I love, yes
but who really loves me?
and how am I supposed to know
where I'm going, what I'm doing
you know...
I think I'm better off alone

I'm starting to wonder
what is it I really want?
where are my dreams from yesterday?
what happened to the girl I knew?
even going home,
I feel I don't belong
and I think deep inside I know I don't...
with no one around to see me
and I won't reach out...
the embers in my soul die out
and you know...
I think I'm better off alone

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  • Darkwell silver member
    July 25

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    This is a wonderful introspection about making changes in life. it stays like a conversation but there are lovely rhymes in it that make it flowy and sombre

    I feel I don't belong
    and I think deep inside I know I don't...
    with no one around to see me
    and I won't reach out...
    the embers in my soul die out
    and you know...
    I think I'm better off alone

    i think we all feel this sometimes an sometimes bein alone helps us find what we want by not being distracted by things we dont.

    Great write!