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your burning up[from that overdose you just had]

your burning up
fever pitch
the actors and actresses have it rough
throw away your minds because your lifes a bitch
pull your heart together
head on straight
its not to late
i'm your biggest mistake

movies change scenery
screaming out lifes indignities
fuck up all your insecurity
tell the world to become nothing
give a kiss and say goodbye to me
bullets never seemed so sexy

heat rises through the floorboard
reaching speeds like cocaine and esctasy
a body high like before
a night like this makes it worthy
to have me lying next to you
fuck all of this it can't be true

fuck cinematics
bleed out your theatrics
killer killer take a gun
bullets never looked so...
she's never felt so...
maybe we could say
we couldn't say
Goodbye

listen to what they'll never know
windsheilds fog whispering dont go
she never said no
golden apples plague the unknown
bodies mingle as one
something they knew the best way to be done
children out the window dance for fun

touch touch of hands
press the bodies close little man
burn burn heat rises again
one track minds and sexual indorphins

change the scenery
like high budget movie
screaming out lifes indignities
fuck up all your insecurity
tell the world to become nothing
give a kiss and say goodbye to me
bullets never seemed so sexy
the fever pitch
didn't we all say life is like loving a bitch

Author notes

hey guys im back this is a work in progress i ran into another writers block about a week or two ago while i was away
but i still got a million to put up so check back later

this is not about anyone

IM HOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEe

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  • SomethingPoetic
    July 7, 2008

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    very different, i loved how everything referenced back to acting or stage production in some way. I dont know if this is what i was looking for, i will read it again later, it is good, but if you have something else you feel would fit more then be more then welcome to enter that, however this piece is fine, i have to read it again for finality. So if you want to keep this in the running then do so!!

    GOOD LUCK


  • broken skylines
    June 30, 2008
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    Homeeee!
    Dude it just flows, I love it.