this mirror holds
nothing
of bleak, for the sky
has gone
nowhere
yet
In a list
A contest entry
- Lie to Me by Friday.
1000 points, ended July 31, 26 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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'yet'
is such a very strong word, isn't it?
It holds all the meaning any reader could hope to find from it, or perhaps as well the hope a person cannot find.
Brevity is definitely a talent of yours.
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You are so inspiring
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what a perfect little poem, and that's saying something
al
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This is so good. You haven't posted in a little bit. Yes I noticed as I keep up with my favorites. It's nice to see a poem from you Kate. There is just enough here to make the poetry speak. No crits. How could I really? The poem has just enough bones and those are very effective ones.
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This too shall pass.
Someday soon you will
again. 
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yes..
I love this too
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i love this-
critically honest.
m
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