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I'm okay ... and you?

 

 

 

 

 
this mirror holds
nothing
of bleak, for the sky
has gone
 

 

 

nowhere

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
yet

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

In a list

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  • Naridill gold member
    July 4
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  • 'yet'

    is such a very strong word, isn't it?
    It holds all the meaning any reader could hope to find from it, or perhaps as well the hope a person cannot find.

    Brevity is definitely a talent of yours.




  • Allyce May
    July 2
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    You are so inspiring


  • AJ Morelli gold member
    July 1

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    what a perfect little poem, and that's saying something


    al


  • apples fell gold member
    June 30

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    This is so good. You haven't posted in a little bit. Yes I noticed as I keep up with my favorites. It's nice to see a poem from you Kate. There is just enough here to make the poetry speak. No crits. How could I really? The poem has just enough bones and those are very effective ones.

    ;

  • Faithbound gold member
    June 30

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    This too shall pass.

    Someday soon you will again.


  • ArtFullyMe gold member
    June 30
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    yes..

    I love this too


  • Cat gold member
    June 30
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    i love this-
    critically honest.

    m

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