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When Hope is Gone (Senryu)

When all hope has gone
Only your voice will remain
So just keep singing

Does it flow well? Could you feel the emotion?

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  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    July 22, 2008
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    Wow!

    There I go again, pressing the wrong key! I can't believe this poem! It's like you wrote this just for me. I wanted to see who was listing Senryu & found mostly mine & then yours popped out at me. I can really identify.I'm a differently able Singer/Songwriter & this is my sentiment exactly. This experience is what keeps my hope alive & spurs me on. I'm thrilled that someone your age could give me the gift of this read! Keep up the fine work! I really hate the fact that when I hit the wrong key even before I comment that my claps don't register! This is what I tried to give you:
    I'm going to see what else you've written so I can make this up to you!


  • Spiritual Soul gold member
    July 1, 2008

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    aww this was so beautiful, i think this is so true. Awesome haiku, it was beautiful and thoughtful. Thanks for your comment!
    Blessings,
    ~Michaela~


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 1, 2008

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    you know i love this poem cause it makes me think of someone who has just entered my life one year ago, i think on this day too, keep it flowing