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[ Paint the sky, ]

Paint the sky,
Amazing colors.
Full of wonder,
And hope.

Paint the sky,
With love,
And charm.
All that is needed.

Don't drop the paint,
On the green grass.
Keep painting,
Away.

Hope the rain,
Won't wash away,
The happy skys,
Up above.

Paint the skys,
The way you want.
All full of clouds,
Puffy and white.

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Brush the Sky by *HansPeterKolb

I think that is the picture... right? Well.. my poem... first one like this... enjoy

A contest entry

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  • In Too Deep1
    July 5, 2008

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    Such a joyful and uplifting take on the prompt. I loved the emotions that this gives. A most enjoyable read. Thanks for entering and best wishes in the comp.


  • steal-my-scene
    June 30, 2008

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    I like this piece. Full of hope and wonder. At least that is how I see it in my eyes. Perhaps I should look at the painting though. Thanks for sharing <3