It describes my life,
Or how i strive to be;
Colourful, content and positive
Thinking free and happily.
My life is like a film
And I feel the rainbow lights the way;
Taking me through the dramatic stages
I create for myself, day by day.
A contest entry
- Awsome Photo prompt by peridotPixi.
450 points, ended July 8, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is really well written. There wasn't one part that I didn't like. Sometimes I feel that way as well. I strive to be colorful, content and positive but it doesn't always work out that way. I really enjoyed this poem.
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Thank you for the entry to my contest,
I love how you have split the picture and just choose one thing to write about, I like how you make the rainbow guide your way, and that you think positive and happily. One suggestion, you could remove the “and I feel” and I think the this poem would still say the same meaning without being too cliché Keep up the wonderful writing, ~Amy
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